Originally Posted by Brutalsleeper
The second one sets out all info quickly and unlike the first one allows the reader to quickly check where certain peices information are.
Eg if I wanted to find out what I have to do to get him safe I would have too read the full body of text in the first one, but in the second the info is presented right there.
So the second one is best
Thanks for the feedback, and good point
I'll do them that way.