You just murdered 5 characters in one chapter! How could you!?! Aside from my grief that the God-like Kron is dead (or is he? ) that was a brutally epic chapter. I'm going to go into more detail about why Gerry (my nickname for the Warmonger) has gone mad. And also try to explain the melding the best I can, and give Mudak, the Planners, Fizark and the coolest of them all, Shelkan, good background. I'll let you know when it's up!
Hells yeah! Suferum is a monster, I wanted to give depth to his background but I'd fuck it up lol. So long as his hatred towards Dalam is explained, we're good. And no worries man, I'm finishing up working in Saints Row 3 and gonna be on Netflix all night so I'll check back to the story before I get to bed or in the morning when I get up!
If you want me to focus on anything specifically when I write, make a little not like I did! That way the story flows to both our likings and we know what one another is expecting
Don't let it get to you! I'll finish it up and post it tomorrow afternoon, I keep forgetting about it cause I've bad like 3 exams and a speech this week for my classes but I get home at noon tomorrow so I'll finish it then