One of my rap songs..

[Krazie]

I dont have them on my computer anymore, but maybe i'll rip them to the computer and share em with ya, but heres a verse from one of my songs, give me some feedback..

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Chorus (Girl singing):

I don't know how I should be feeling in this sudden masquerade
but if that's true could I have been so easily forgotten

Verse 1:

Camera flashes and born lies, my life in still frame
Showing only the benefits of havin' money and fame
But when that feeling runs out, so does the flame
Minds grow tired, living is affected, nothing but pain
Because when everybody knows your face and your name
You are constantly expected.. To entertain..
No matter the circumstances, you always have to be the same
I can't always be Krazie, but I forget what it's like to be sane
So when I showed my insanity, I automatically became a robot, the lion with no brain
And no matter what, I must remain in that state
So strangers will never look at me as mundane
It's just the downfall of trying to rule my domain
Trying to stay on top of the game?
That's like as unreal as there is no hurt and pain
I cut myself, and I'm shocked to see no blood inside my veins

------CHORUS------

Verse 2:

I'm a fictionary character, that's insane
I'm scared of my true self, here's me, boring and plain
So become someone else, put on a mask, take on a new name
And use the mic of shadows, they'll never want me to change
I pick up my best friend, with my heart of steel I aim
And change the way you think by damagin' the brain
How much longer can I last? My heart is overdosed on pain
But I guess stayin strong was my destiny, I was born to reign

Sometimes I wish soul could switch bodies just one time
So I could see the world through a different pair of eyes
Cause mine are gettin blurry, everything is turnin and spinnin
I'm infected with this venom, this feels like the endin'
But it's the only beginning, I'm only starting to climb
Trying to reach the peak of the mountain before I get to my prime
And the only clear picture that my eyes can configure
Is a golden throne.. Written on it is a scripture..
That reads "When it comes to life, there are no victims"
So why do try to crush other emcees like a constrictor?
And why do I strive to be the greatest rapper alive?
When I'll end up losing everything I work to get when I die
Cause I live for the moment, the thrill of victory
Like dead presidents, my name forever be etched in history
The origin of my rhymes will forever remain a mystery
As I stumble through life drunk, my spirit's pissed at me

-----CHORUS x 2-----

Verse 3:

Fed up with life, but what do I get when its the end for Jason?
A twenty-five percent chance of going to heaven
And a twenty-five percent chance of spending eternity with Lucifer
And a fifty percent chance that all the religion shit is obsurd
So I stay with the odds, and remain only believin' in myself
Cause wealth already killed me, I'm just waitin for my health
To catch up and finish the job, so I can become a legend
One of the best on the mic, using my word as weapons

-----CHORUS-----

[Krazie]

A few other samples to show the diversity that I display in all my songs:

My insane lyrical ability (try to decode this!):

I enslave deprived scribes, gaining dust neglected by mic tribes
Ancient runes and tablets forsee scorn ties
Reflected by torn lies, descrated upon born skies
Life condemned due to one lie!
Golden scepters and ageless scripts encrypt passage
When I speak, crimson roses bleed over the masses
Tarnished oils feel forgotten fingerprints, markin' the pinnacle of creation
Ignorant minds require resparation and revert back into crustaceans
Some need a manual just to operate their physical station
Born to a forbidden location, and destined to die due to fornication
Ethically impure, pharoahs predicted my presence years before my arrival through the womb
I was planned to embody a royal tomb, my prophecy begins all too soon

A love ballad to my girlfriend entitled "Forever":

I pray that God brings death to me before he brings it to you
Because only Lord knows that when you're gone, a piece of me dies too
Your voice is one of the most beautiful sounds to grace my ears
Your words, are one of the few things that can move me to tears
I don't know what it is, there's just a certain presence when you're around
Like God took an angel from above, and put her on Earth's ground
And know you're here, totally changing my perspective on the world
Never did I think Jesus would be in the form of this girl

You've done something to me my family could only dream about
Gotten me to open up, let every emotion I feel come out
I feel pure and clean like me lovin someone was a disease
And then you came along in the shape of the vaccine
And instantly, I was cured, the pain just simply disappeared
Now my life is perfect, I have nothin left to fear
Cause no matter where I go in life, believe me, I'll never forget
The happiest day of my life, the day that we met
And to me, beauty is not all about facial features and body shapes
But your physical perfection, just adds food to the plate
With the face of Venus, and two diamonds as your eyes
It's enough to make blind men curse God for not giving them sight


My religious/sentimental side:

I'mma be me, because I was raised that way, never to be fake
I learned from my mistakes and only hate those who hate
Lord, why'd you take my mother? How I wish I could see her face
But I know she's in a better place and she's seein' better days
But still we can't all stop thinkin about her everyday
If she were only here still talkin, still walkin, and still breathin
We must understand that God does what he does for reasons

My story-telling side:

Before tonight, my life was bland, I just lived in a box
No destination, no one to talk to, just me and my thoughts
I never knew I would be made and used for hurtin' a life
Someone kids, a happy home, and even a wife
Til I was picked up and taken out of my place
A hollow tip with the name John scratched in the case
I watched my owner Bob grab a bag and put a mask on his face
He took the heat and placed me gently in the chamber with grace



GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK GUYS! :)

[Cola Alone]

I like them alot. I want to hear them with music.
good shit, good shit.





Verse 2:

I'm a fictionary character, that's insane

fictionary isn't word.

[IMportdreams95]

thats pretty cool. you should def. check out my Records Labels Myspace.
http://www.myspace.com/midwestrecords

there is 4 songs on there. the first song we made for my friend who is an amature cage fighter. but the other 3 are real songs for their cd.

[Krazie]

I like them alot. I want to hear them with music.
good shit, good shit.





fictionary isn't word.

Hmm.. Wonder how I did that one.. :(

[Webb]

They don't have to be real words! Who says that? Just leave it man, adds mystery ;)

[Krazie]

They don't have to be real words! Who says that? Just leave it man, adds mystery ;)

"Fictionary"... I like it..

Sounds like a good word :woop:

[Webb]

It's like a fiction dictionary, or more like an urban street dictionary ;)